Who is it Who I Am? (Three or less letter word poem)

Just a simple little poem for the "Three Letters Or Less" contest here on the cafe.

Oh, who is it who I am?

The lie I was is not

Nor the box you put me in,

But if not, who am I now?

 

Why did you mar the lie,

Why did you not let me be?

Who you say I am I do not see

And yet I see you, for you I try.

 

One day I'll win, you say.

You see, I do not see how...

But if not, who can I be now?

For you are me, and I am you.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[there is no more from m..]

well written :)

[Greg Skura]

Cute and well put together! Thank You!

[Angel Baby]

Wow, great take on the challenge. You made it look very easy. My guess on the question to your poem is....one great poetry writer. PW

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Really good!

Sal