Six Word Story

Six Word Story

A Story by Constance
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A 6 word story- this is harder than it seems.

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There was a battle. Everyone lost.

© 2008 Constance


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I love these six word memoirs! Surely you either have a copy of or heard of the book... I think that's the title actually - Six Word Memoirs. A friend of mine bought a copy a couple of months ago and we have been tossing them back and forth since. Better be careful tossing this one though! Wow... this is explosive; perhaps the most powerful one I've read thus far. Regardless of what side of the fence you're on, nobody wins in battle (and that goes for any battle really). Take war for instance... after all, what is to be won? I'm not saying that war is not necessary; it's not the easy. But... even when one side 'wins', what have they won and at what cost have they won it? Whether it was necessary or not, people still died and, inevitably, some of those people are going to be innocent. "Everyone lost". Six words... you said so much with just six words... fantastic- keep up the great work!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Wow. Good job! Great story! (Don't be hurt, though, if I don't buy the book.)

Posted 16 Years Ago


It's deep. zvery deep. I enjoyed it very much, perhaps I shall take a crack at these 6 word memoirs...

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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wow, really cool. never heard of this six word thing. i enjoyed it though. i read it several times and got something different everytime. very good.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love these six word memoirs! Surely you either have a copy of or heard of the book... I think that's the title actually - Six Word Memoirs. A friend of mine bought a copy a couple of months ago and we have been tossing them back and forth since. Better be careful tossing this one though! Wow... this is explosive; perhaps the most powerful one I've read thus far. Regardless of what side of the fence you're on, nobody wins in battle (and that goes for any battle really). Take war for instance... after all, what is to be won? I'm not saying that war is not necessary; it's not the easy. But... even when one side 'wins', what have they won and at what cost have they won it? Whether it was necessary or not, people still died and, inevitably, some of those people are going to be innocent. "Everyone lost". Six words... you said so much with just six words... fantastic- keep up the great work!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

At first this made me smile, but then I realized the depth of this story. Wow, this is cool!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Strangely enough, I actually got a message from this story. It's like, conflict and battles are bad, and, in the end, nobody gains anything. Thank you for the interestingly short story. : ) Blessed Be!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not bad for six words. Thanks for the minutia story.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Constance
Constance

A Small Town in, KS



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I write about my past, my own real experiences. Even my poetry is inspired by my life. I was, I suppose, born writing, making up stories and rhymes from about when I started to speak, but had to wait .. more..

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