Awake and Ready

A practice of poetry without rhyme. Tell me what you think. Does it work or are the pieces with rhyme better?

A sensation of ease,

Relaxation,

And readiness.

Light-

Soft breath,

Shoulders without weight,

Eyesight and focus without strain,

Freshness in the skin.

The sun is happy,

Giving the trees and flowers warm encouragement,

Giving the infinite and vast skies

A gentle and celestial Blue.

A rather intoxicating state of being.

Past resolved,

Future: infinite and bright.

Moving forward doesn't have to be a fight,

Just a step at a time-

In the right direction,

Confident that it'll turn alright.

Reviews

[Azif]

Amazing description and just a great poem. Really love the hopeful vibe :)
definitely works without rhyme too