One Guy

One Guy

A Poem by Bandgeek

That one guy you know      

with a smile so soft,

The words he says to gain

your trust.

He knows your strengths

and weeknesses to.

He holds you when your

lost, but when your found he

must let go.

He says the right words

at the right moment.

Never failling to make you

feel good.

He never gets jealous when you

date his friends.

Only says " you could better"

The feeling he gives you

when he has your back.

The look in his eye

when you say good bye

shows the amount o f

care he has for you.

He never lies

and never shouts.

For he is the one

who holds your heart.

 

© 2011 Bandgeek


Author's Note

Bandgeek
ignore grammer.
And i really hope you like and i hope one day i can find a guy like this.

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probably my favorite from you

Posted 13 Years Ago


*Gets up from chair*
Hi, my name is Star Ninja, and I'm a recovering Grammar Nazi.
-Hi Star Ninja-
I've been sober for a few weeks now and going strong. In fact, the other day I read the comment section of a Youtube video and I didn’t correct any of the language on it.
*circled group claps*
Thank you. Like I said, I was doing well. Very well. Then, earlier today, I almost fell off the wagon.
-What happened?-
I… I’m sorry this is a little difficult for me. I was on writer’s café. I was browsing the latest works of my friends, when a message popped up at me. Bandgeek wants you to read a new poem. I was elated, because I hadn’t read any new Bandgeek stuff in a long while. I opened the page… and what I saw shocked me. It… it was gut wrenching. Misspelled words, missing words, incorrect use of punctuation and God help me I almost corrected it. It would have been so easy. But, you know what the worst part was? Bandgeek asked that we ignore the grammar. She asked the impossible of me. I mean, the errors were everywhere! I would even describe them as rampant! Rampant!
*gasps and hushed whispering*
It was truly a test of my willpower. But in the end I refrained. I took deep breaths, counted down from ten and followed the 12 steps. I didn’t correct any of the grammar.
*claps and approving nods*
The poem itself was pretty good. I liked it. But the grammar. God, it was torture. But like I said I didn’t correct it. I respect Bandgeek too much to go against her wishes. And that’s my story.
*Sits down again*
-He should have written out the twelve-

Posted 13 Years Ago



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