words of hate

another poem i thought of in spanish yeah she hates me

Words of hate

role off the tongue.

Tears don't

stop,

kids just laugh

till they can't

no more.

All you want is

one good friend

but, ridicule

is what you get.

They come so blunt

which makes is

worse.

They stare when you

cry the most,

but laugh when

it hurts  the

worse.

Teachers say

they'll make it

stop.

 The words dont mean

a thing in the end

the words are

worse, beatings

harsh.

The words just

stay whith

all the

pain

Reviews

[HorrorMaster]

Yeah I can understand this. I like it

[Amanda Dawn Sanderson-G..]

I like how your words are broken apart and how nothing is capitalized, it shows how broken and beat down you are.

"the words dont mean
a thing in the end
the words are
worse beatings
harsh" -- This is the part I find to be the most powerful because it's full of truths. No, the words don't mean anything, in the end... but the pain they bring you could last a life time. I spent many years depressed with low self esteem because of words that I allowed to build up in my mind, words that meant nothing coming from nobodies... but at the time it meant everything to me. Why me? It's harsh and a beat down and makes one miserable.... but when you finally come out of it all... you are far stronger than anyone else but it just proves that you are a better and stronger person than the ones that spew the words...

The abusers always end with lives of misery and the ones strong enough to fight through it learn that life is better when you ignore the ignorance of others and their lives become... beautiful. I know, I've lived through it and now I have the life that only some can dream of. And I mean a life full of love, not money and power.

Thanks for sharing this piece with me.... I loved it. Keep writing!

[Brad]

hahahaahha...i think i would drop spanish class