words of hate

thought of this one in spanish class lets just say that my spanist teacher doesnt like me very much :)

The tears stream doen

while the words of hate

spill from their mouths

looser, stupid,unloved

the shoved and laughed

when the tears came

back

pitiful looks from everyone

no one helps

the tears come more

tge words are worse

go to hell, unwanted

the pains to much

words come true

i tryed to hide

but the feelings never left

i believed what they

said

tears come back that

those 4 words that caused

go home and kill yourself

the voice said it all

those words he

ment

the tears never left

that night i tryed

all the they said

the actions they did

their voices drove

me mad

to slit my wrist

and die in pain.

Reviews

[HorrorMaster]

Very sad but I like it

[Amanda Dawn Sanderson-G..]

Depressing, but I love the fall of your words. Not to mention it's powerful and realistic... yet, still depressing...

Nice work.

[Brad]

ouch, this one is a little self loathing...though i do love that nature, it is a disturbing peice...bravo

[Undying Glory]

powerful words here, this sure is a great write you've crafted. i think you've written very well in this poem. i sure think i know what you mean, that anger sure bubbles out of this poem. very good job here and keep this up!