No one listens

the tears

the anger

all the pain

and the screaming

to just praying.

to just being lost

to the emptyness

to hatefulness

no one ever

listend.

to just wanting to be heard,

but no one

ever listens

Reviews

[HorrorMaster]

Very good

[Enigma]

Very frank and very piercing write. Everyone faces the feeling once in their lives when all they want to do is to lay out all their troubles for others to see, to have them listen to our thoughts and pain but in the end, the only listener we manage to get is our own bruised self.
Well written! :)

[Amanda Dawn Sanderson-G..]

It seems that when you want or need to be heard the most that everyone seems to be deaf, doesn't it? No one recognizes a cry for help until it's too late. Great write.

[Brad]

what a frustrating cry out from the wilderness of deaf ears

[StarNinja]

I like my poetry like my doctor's appointments, short and simple. Keep writing!

[Undying Glory]

nice work here, i sure like this one, this captures exactly everyone whose freedom of speech has been trampled upon and destroyed. isn't it so hard to be that one whom everyone ignores?
but to me this spoke out more than just bullying or things like that, but to the people who really have no freedom, forever trapped in this vicious cycle of persecution, now this was very strong. i noticed you misspelled "emptiness" and "listened" but who cares anyway?
awesome!