moon part 1

sorry bout the parts but i didnt realize i would write this much

The moon is shining and i am at my highest. I howl at the moon i call forth my brethren and live like i never have. I start to talk to the pack and someone is yelling at me.

 

 "Jake get out of bed," over and over. i wake up to a water bucket to the head. " I told you to be up an hour ago. Now you are going to be late to for school," oh s**t I'm in trouble. Man that dream was so vivid. I felt like i was there. I dont know i just always beleive that i dont belong here. I feel like the world is against me.

 

Alright so on my way to school this really weird kid stopped me. He wanted to know if i was different. I was like "Of course i am different. everyone is." No

 

"No i mean are you like different  in like a way no one else is," ok this kid is confuseing. I dont understand what he is saying. Out of know where this question he asked " do you dream that you are a werewolve?"

 

"Yes, I have to go. So bye," this kid is not giving up at all.

 

"You dont need school. Follow me," Heyy what the hell. Its not like school is getting me anywhere in life. So he is leading me into the forest and now i am thinking this is a bad idea. I try to leave but he told me it was to late to leave. We get to the middle of the woods and he rips off  my shirt and goes for the neck.

 

"What the hell dude,"  he startes to scream pushing him away from his neck.

 

"You dont get it. I have to kill you. You are an enemy," what the hell is going on. This dude is trying to kill me. What did i ever do to him.

 

"Why do you want to kill me. I never did anything to you. How am i your enemy," I start to cry. I dont know what i did. I start running, but its not fast enough and he gets me and pushes me to the ground. This dude has fangs. I thought that those things where just make beleive.

 

This dog like figure comes up and just attacks this beast. All i see is the monsters head rolling right next me. I start to hypervenolate. The dog like figure comes towards me. "What the hell are you?"

 

" I am one of your brethren. You see you are at the age where you will become your true self. You will not hide in this body anymore. You will be able to convert. But your real body is your wolf form. These next couple of days you will eat more and you will start to get bigger and hairier. Friday meat me here," I dont know this guy. But i am already getting hairier and hungry.

 

"What if i dont show up?"

 

"Oh trust me you will," he sounded so positive that i would show up. Well i went to school. Got yelled at for being late. And i noticed i was hungrier.

 

The next was just a blur. I got up ans was getting ready when i noticed that all my where to small. Thats weird i havent since like 8th grade. I came down breakfast in sweats. It felt like i couldnt stop eating. It was only wensday, but i had him. I cant cotrol whats happening. The dreams get worse and worse. I start to find full moons. The dreams are the worse. But if its a new moon. I dont have any.

 

I run to the woods looking for that man.

 

"Haha. Two days early i see. Thought you would come friday, but what a sight to see. You have gotten worse much faster than i have anticipated. Your body is coming faster.I am much glad you came. Have your dreams increased?" He knew everything. While i just am a confused kid.

 

"Yes, the dreams are much worse. Dont have any on new moons. I am so hungry all the time. I have grown. What is happening to me?" I am just so confused. The person never met before is helping me. He goes throw and explains everything to me. I start to understand. The only pert i didnt like. Was that i woul have to leave my life and family behind. I guess if i dont. I will kill them. I agree to go. He leads me threw the forset. When i spot a group of dogs.

 

 He look at me and said "This will be your home. Theese are your brethren. When you change. You are the alpha. You will lead us through hard times and good times," I am so lost. i have no clue how i can lead. He said by tomorrow i should change.

 

"What if im not ready? What if i dont want to? Dude you guys dont get it. Im human not a monster," this is so confusing. They say im there leader and i dont even no them all. They tell me that my dad is one and that is why he is never there. My mom told me that my dad died. I look up and saw a man that looked exactly like me. My world is just being turned upside down.

 

In the very end i say s**t. This must be real. I beleive them. I wake up in the morning looking like a dog. Wow they wherent kidding. I had honestly thought that they where pulling a prank on me.

   

 

Author's Note

im not down yet.
but still review please

Reviews

[Brad]

the dialogue really makes this reality

[StarNinja]

People with fangs aren't make believe. Ever been to a Vamp convention or LARP? Yeah neither have I, but I imagine there are tons of people with fangs hanging around there.
The story was short, sweet and simple. Dialogue could use some work but I still enjoyed it.

B+

[HorrorMaster]

Very good so far