Purity glides

Purity glides

A Poem by AlanaLJay

Invisible mind that has the thought of you trapped

Within the chains that bind my eyes

I lie here waiting for you to realize

That every murmuring breath longs to reach your presence

And exhale life into an image too pure to see

Swiftly gliding breath brings shivers to your conscience

Finally seeing

A soul barred

To reveal a love so badly burned by the purity that could be

You and I

© 2014 AlanaLJay


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I love love love this. The image of the waiting person who can see a bright future and is waiting for the other to come and realize. Crossed with the image of "trapped". Perfect. Thank you for sharing,

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AlanaLJay
AlanaLJay

cape town, South Africa



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