Revelation

Poem

I have confessions to make….

that tears in my eyes were fake….

deep down in me lived a a wicked malicious creature..

a scavenger, a parasite, a shameless leecher…

but one day i had to change

as life showed me realities strange

I had to open my eyes atlast

and repent the deeds of past

for there is a light in the end to walk through

where there will be things to prove

so confess and ask for mercy, friend

before its late, just heal and mend

Reviews

[Laminators Dubai]

hi!
first thing...we can only solve a problem if you say its a problem...realizeing is good...a point about this poem...

its a one thoughtful write as your other writings...

great...

thanks for sharing this marvel write....

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Thanks again for stopping by..glad u liked it :)

[Laminators Dubai]

i didnt stop i guess...i thought its a reading...
^^

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like this, we all have sinned and had bad thoughts enter in our minds...we need to realize this and ask for forgiveness because we don't have to be prisoners to the things that drag us down.

Good Job

[confused]

Thank You Peace Keeper. :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

You're welcome