Sweet cakes, hunny bunch, sugar pie

Love poem

Hey sweet cakes, hunny bunch, sugar pie

its you I love and can't figure out why

maybe it's the things I can't hear or see

like the happiness when we are together that you show me

or it could be other things that are physical

like your lips or your eyes that are oh so mystical

when I think about you babe, it makes me smile

I'm so glad we met you are so worth while

I think of all your qualities, you have a ton

and out of all of them I couldn't pick just one.

so hey sweet cakes, hunny bunch, sugar pie

It's you I love and now I know why

I love you for not just one thing

Its all of you combined that makes you my Queen!

Author's Note

Highschool relationship :)

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

delightful and playful poetic banquet~ much enjoyed~ =)~

[TTBoy28]

Very darling and sincere! Mystical and Physical - great word choices!

[Annette Jay Sweeney]

Very nice Condor! I like that you repeat the first line, and how even though they are kinda gushy little sentiments, I still enjoy them. The rhythm is very nice. I can feel the beat in this one. Congrats on a job well done :).