I'm not what you want

I'm not what you want

A Poem by thespaceinmybed

I'm not even close
you want someone to make you feel alive
to reach through your skin and your hurt and your scars
and create some kind of magic

I can't
I can't turn you into something you aren't

I am hell
the lost
the damned
but I can make you feel
complete

I can make you bleed
and think
that’s what you need

you  can say I’m broken
but you’re the one knocking
at my door
you’re the one
on your knees

you’re the one
saying please

© 2013 thespaceinmybed


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i always enjoy my visits to your mind..

you never cease to surprise and evoke

hope your days are going well :)
Antonio

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thespaceinmybed

10 Years Ago

thank you. you are always so complimentary. hope the same for you!
Antonio Valentino

10 Years Ago

thank you yes all is well..

Happy New Year
Antonio :)


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Added on December 30, 2013
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thespaceinmybed
thespaceinmybed

Los Angeles, CA



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