You're the midnight I taste with my eyes closed

A lost whisper I can't grip

So keep your name and your ways

Cause nothing else warms me

You are the blanket full of stars

I like to wrap around my shivering body

In a empty parking lot

Reviews

[Lilly]

I agree with Sarrow - Love the title! And the lines
"You are the blanket full of stars
I like to wrap around my shivering body"
are definitely my favourite.
Lovely, short, sweet poem

[thespaceinmybed]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it

[Lilly]

You're welcome :)

[Chris]

The pic and the words vied for attention. The last three lines were standalone strong... the first three felt angry

[thespaceinmybed]

Thank you, I didn't mean them to be angry but now that I think about it maybe a bit of anger slipped in there subconsciously

[Chris]

It happens when we hurt

[Sarrow]

I love the title of this to begin with, it really sets this up. I also thought that the whole idea of a 'blanket full of stars' was great and beautiful.

[thespaceinmybed]

Thank you, your feedback is appreciated!