Thoughts whilst awakening...

The sweet nectar of love
now tastes of bitter poison
on your lips,
Yet you continue to indulge
in the spoiled memories
As if to show that your
"sacrifice"
proves you are still worthy
of drinking with those
who love purely.

Reviews

[Carolynn]

This is short and cuts right to the point - don't mess with pure love - very well written!

[richy]

f**k this is so f*****g good.
"Yet you continue to indulge
in the spoiled memories
As if to show that your
"sacrifice" "

[B J Hughes]

Aye! The receiving of "love" out of duty rather than desire leaves much to be desired. Very well said!