Chocolate

A poem, about chocolate?

Chocolate, they say,

Is good for the soul.

 

It release endorphins,

Comforts us,

Makes us happy.

 

Eat at every opportunity,

But never anything but chocolate.

Anything else will turn you bitter,

Chocolate is bliss, is perfect.

 

But never eat too much.

After an hour you will be left with,

Sickness and a churning stomach,

And no chocolate to comfort you.

Reviews

[LefthandWrite]

Oi! A piece after my heart! Now for a piece of something chocolatey!

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

this is awesome :P now I want chocolate.. but other than that the poem is totally true :')

[Yina]

I like this. Maybe cuz I love chocolate:) lol Nice poem:)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I love this poem too. I hate chocolate yesterday. I was in a great mood after eating it. Good poem. Thanks for sharing. :D

[Just a Dream]

i love this poem

[piggy]

send this straight to cadbury

they will love it, as did i

[Solidad]

And a serious amount of calories to work off. This is an honest piece with (pardon the pun) bittersweet tone to it. Its well written and technically flawless. Well done.

[raindroplove]

i love chocolate good job!!!!!