Join me

?umm enjoy?

Join me, and die in this place we’ve come to despise

walk with me, a long ways into the night

Regret that i ever considerd my options

take these memories and forget you forgot them

One day our dreams will be faded scars

that intwine in our mangled, broken hearts

Take my hand, pretend to care

step out of this love which was never there

I tried, i will tell you, i tried so hard

and attempted to reconcile my heart

Its a lost cause at best, and i've giving up

I gave you my all, but it wasnt enough

Author's Note

I like it now :) FYI I wrote this about 2 years ago.

Reviews

[Victoria Harlequin]

This poem is fantastic.
I've written things with similar meanings.
Great write!
:]

[Kelley]

2 years 10 years its great!!! Speaks of pain and longing or trying to forget? Anyway great write Jera!!! Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Vaishali..^_^]

wow..!nice one...i enjoyed reading it...
great work...
very well written..!

[Jera]

i was just looking to improve it

[justjenn_2u]

I love the hidden meanings in each line. You ask what is wrong with this, I can't pinpoint a major problem.

The lines are deep so I read this several times.

[Looouise]

nothing.