River

River

A Poem by Rosalind Smith
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A basic haiku describing a well...a river.

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Flowing down the hills,
A rumbling sound in my ears,
Like a smoothing song.

© 2015 Rosalind Smith


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Rosalind Smith
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Like this poem, yes
And you wrote it very well
Now ends my critique

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Rosalind Smith
Rosalind Smith

Hong Kong, China



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