The Gentle Breeze

A Kontest Entry

    Beneath this old oak, me in your arms, we whisper sweet nothings. All day we have been here. Without a care in the world, all our worries left behind, we enter a world of the unknown. A world of just you and me. Our fingers intertwined. Face to face. A Gentle breeze blows my hair, hiding our faces. When we kiss, i feel like I am floating on air. When we touch, its as if I've been shocked. My heart races everytime I see you, yet, you are the only person I want to be with. I would lay my life on the line, just to say yours. If you die, it would be as if I had nothing to live for. The sun wouldn't shine, there would be no reason for me to get out of bed. When we arrived in our meadow, we listened to the babbling brook, and watched the clouds. Your old blue pick up truck painted a back drop for our wondrous afternoon.

  Alas, the sun starts to set. Summer is almost over, so no more of these trips. We wil make do of what little time we have. Our love will stay strong, till the end. A promise is a promise. Words are words. I could tell that you meant what you said, and that you didn;t say it without meaning. The long drive home, asleep on your shoulder. The radio is quiet. We arrive at my house, you walk me to the door. We seal our good byes not with words, but with a soft kiss.

Author's Note

:D! 5 minute Storeh for teh ppls!

Reviews

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Well Written

[WriterMe]

oh this was so sweet. It really makes your toes curl up when your in that special feeling. The imagery was so pleasant. It really makes summer romances all the more special =] Great work.