Until i'm with you

Until i'm with you

 

As time creeps by
I try not to cry
Wondering when life will end
So i can start again
Someplace new
I will be up there with you
I cry, I weep, I don't sleep
I won't be me until i'm with you
A second
A minute
An hour 
A day
I'll wait a lifetime to be with you
hHolding you
Hugging you
Kissing you
Loving you
A week
A year
I wish you were here

Author's Note

I wrote this a long time ago and just found it tell me what u think

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

Love can make you feel that you are only half alive, in your longing to be with your soul mate. Nothing can take your mind from thoughts of them, memories of them. This poem expresses your intent, very well.. By the way the spelling is "weep" not weap. You would do your readers a great service in using punctuation. They exist for a reason. :)

[Colleen a Bean]

Thanks I thought that was spelt wrong haha

[Timeless-Chan]

it sounds like you're writing about a lover who died:( maybe a soldier or just someone who died at a young age:(

[Colleen a Bean]

lol ya it does but really I was just missing my ex really bad and it just felt like he was dead because we werent talking because his girlfriend at the time forbid him to speak to me :(

[Poetic Beauty]

Sounds like a military situation or.long distance that yearning is deeply rooted inside

[Colleen a Bean]

lol now that u mention it lol it kinda does haha

[Poetic Beauty]

It does to me

[Wondering Mind]

I think this has a very touching voice...tender, longing...lovely.

[Colleen a Bean]

Thanks haha