A Love that never stopped

We met and from that first look

And from that first touch,

From that first kiss

We knew we were in love

Our realtionship was short

But we stayed friends

Then u asked for me back again

We flirted alot

Then I found out about her

We kept in touch

We still flirted and talked

But it just wasnt the same

You never decided to choose me

It was always her

But yet you guys could never talk about things

I was the one you told everything

You guys started having problems

I tried to help you out

Then it was over between her and you

All of a sudden I was your one

I was your love

We dated awhile

Then things went wrong

You ended us

It broke my heart

You went back to her for a very very short time

It was just to complicated

You asked for me back

I said yes once again

You said u needed more time

To enjoy the single life

And that within time

We could be together again

 

Reviews

[Timeless-Chan]

the heart wants what it wants even if it can't decide at first lol nice depiction of that:)

[Colleen a Bean]

Thanks haha

[Aurora .I.]

I find it once again ironic that people choose to be with the people they can't talk to and even when you can be with the one you can talk to, they still refuse to. But I can completely relate to this poem! And this is fantastic! I love it! Keep up the good work! Thank you for sharing your art with the world!

[Colleen a Bean]

It was easy to write this poem I just wrote a little story it felt like but I am happy u like it :)

[Aurora .I.]

That's what poems are! They are shorter versions of stories!

[Colleen a Bean]

lol true but I am not used to writing poems like a story haha

[Bare trees]

Love is such mysterious thing. We want someone, than we don't. Then we want them again, then we don't. If it don't come easy, as the song says, you better let it go.

[Colleen a Bean]

I've always loved him He just isn't ready for me as usual and sometimes I feel like I come in 2nd place but I can't seem to ever get mad at him maybe it's because I'm still young and in highschool lol that I can't get over him.

[Bare trees]

That's a very strong possibility. You may look back years from now and wonder what you were thinking. Haha Then again, you might be married to him too. Haha

[Colleen a Bean]

lol he has suggested that many times and I think even if we don't get married one day he will always be my best friend we tell eachother everything anyway lol

[Bare trees]

Friendship is the most important element in any relationship. You're lucky.

[Colleen a Bean]

lol thanks but sometimes it really sucks having the person u love as your best friend because u have to see him happy with someone else but oh well my writing helps me through it when he can't.

[Bare trees]

I know what you mean, it's hard. But if you're meant to be together you may have to wait. Hmm, don't know.

[Colleen a Bean]

lol ya I agree but I'm 16 with no patience so its going to take awhile lol

[Bare trees]

Ah ha, so I see. Yup, it's going to take a while.

[Colleen a Bean]

lol if u read some of my other poems u will understand how tough it is going to be considering he is the inspiration to almost every poem I have ever wrote lol

[Bare trees]

Uh uh. ha

[Colleen a Bean]

lol what haha

[Bare trees]

I've heard that many times before.

[Colleen a Bean]

lol oh ok hehe

[Satire69]

we met and from that first look

Make we, We, it needs to be a capitale letter

[Colleen a Bean]

Thanks lol I thought I fixed that woops hehe

[Satire69]

:)

[Cosmic kid]

This poem projects the difficult troubles that come with love. I love it good job :)

[Colleen a Bean]

lol thanks Most of my poems are about the same guy lol First guy I ever dated and I guess my poems show That I can not get over him

[Cosmic kid]

I know what you mean I'm going through about the same predicament, but I mean but I mean whoever this guy is, he's making you write some pretty awesome poems :) I hate it when people tell you to try to move on but it's not as easy as it sounds.

[Colleen a Bean]

lol ya He loves my poetry also and we share everything even when I'm upset with some things that involve him he always comforts me and thanks I like to write it kinda frees me from everything in my life.