Hopeful Warrior

That day sky was at it's height
I found darkness which breaks the light,
My life moved towards painful valleys and slope,
But I never regret and feel there is a hope;
I fought in the battles of torn,
Behold! One day I found the rising morn.

Reviews

[Anjali]

Wow... It's so good! It's small but it holds so much meaning in it! Absolutely beautiful and so empowering. You made me feel like I can do anything for a moment, and that's talent! Amazing!

[cold_hearted77]

Thank you so much!

[Anjali]

You are welcome!

[Mr.Writer]

Hope, thats what keeps up moving!
A very positive, encouraging and engaging write...
Well done, keep it up :))

[cold_hearted77]

Thank you very much!

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :))

[Wajiha Nayeem]

too good...keep it up........

[cold_hearted77]

Thank you for appreciating

[Abraham George]

nice words and rhyme. keep writing.

[cold_hearted77]

Thank you very much

[Farhan Shaikh]

Great write..enjoyed your motivational words

[Tony Jordan]

I think Alas (which is a negative exclamatory word) should be 'Behold' (which - usually - has positive connotations). Alas means regret here.

[cold_hearted77]

Thank you for the interpretation it will help me to develop my writing skills

[Najam Us Saher]

Great transformation of your self from the beginning to the end. I really liked this.

[cold_hearted77]

Thanks najam

[Najam Us Saher]

No need to mention thanks... ☺