AMERICA'S WON

AMERICA'S WON

A Poem by Devra Keokongchack
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Aspirations askew

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This Neverending war that has never really begun.
such worry for countries except the one that we run.
circles lead to nowhere or somewhere over and over the Neverending search for that lucky 4 leaved clover.
shaking hands and clapping them
shaking a*s while everyone laughs at them
what happened to values ? what happened to basics?
what's happening to the world as we pillage and rape it?
concentrate on what's going on over the seas. F**k fundamentals F**k saving the bees.
#Hashtag that put some RESPEK on it
if it doesn't make dollars dont bank on it.
blood bank .. (ouch!) money bank All one in the same Adding up your life checking for fortune and fame.
who needs religion or spirituality? Just sign away your life Be all you can bee?
better than everyone the rest yet we don't even rank. Getting what we want getting what we take. weapons of mass destruction but you cant have them too.
nuclear weapons Yeah you know what those do.
eyes on the prize believing all of the lies.
America one but we're so f*****g dumb... Silent when logical Our way of thinking is numb.
numb to the pesticides numb to disease numb to the fact that we are killing our trees ..
Beggars...

begging for food and clean air to breathe begging for forgiveness as we sin and deceive. Begging for everything except that which we need. American greeed .. too much pride to put differences aside.
in god we lust .. Lustrous asses and big bouncing busts.
envious of resources and life thereof lacking
too lazy for work constant life hacking.
gluttonous and vengeful you will feel the wrath!
taking pride in its conquests leaving sicknesses and death along the path.
7 continents to unleash each of its sins forgetting where happiness ends abundance never begins.
the home of the enslaved and land of the dumb. caring about nothing more than to be number won

© 2017 Devra Keokongchack


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' Numb to the fact that we are killing our trees
begging for food and clean air to breathe begging for forgiveness as we sin and deceive. Begging for everything except that which we need.'

Brilliant ! Full to the brim with anger, cynicism and TRUTH! This sings to the rafters, shouts, echoes.

Should be printed in thousands and plastered all over those 7 continents. Whilst of course, they still exist?!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

7 Years Ago

Not being American, I was careful to think and write generally...
Devra Keokongchack

7 Years Ago

lol like parents setting non examples
emmajoy

7 Years Ago

No, just being diplomatic..



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"in god we lust .. Lustrous asses and big bouncing busts.
envious of resources and life thereof lacking
too lazy for work constant life hacking.
gluttonous and vengeful you will feel the wrath!
taking pride in its conquests leaving sicknesses and death along the path"

Favorite lines throughout. This was a work of art. Holy f**k!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Devra Keokongchack

7 Years Ago

hahahhahaa thanks for that!
Stark warning out there. From the amazon rain forest to the Brazilian rain forest. Nature has a very blunt way of saying, enough is enough.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Devra Keokongchack

7 Years Ago

simply put! yes indeed nature is a natural when it comes to perseverance
I believe no-one will win.
"7 continents to unleash each of its sins forgetting where happiness ends abundance never begins.
the home of the enslaved and land of the dumb. caring about nothing more than to be number won"
With greed, separation and self-interest. Few nations will hold their ground. USA won't fall. A big country. Some states, like some countries can survive without no-one help. Have food, water and enough oil. Let's hope. All of us learn. Every life had value and if one country goes down. Will begin a falling of many. Thank you Devra for sharing the amazing poetry. Made me think this morning.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Devra Keokongchack

7 Years Ago

the day i can make someone think is when I relish in its entirety.
thank you for reading and.. read more
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome Devra.
' Numb to the fact that we are killing our trees
begging for food and clean air to breathe begging for forgiveness as we sin and deceive. Begging for everything except that which we need.'

Brilliant ! Full to the brim with anger, cynicism and TRUTH! This sings to the rafters, shouts, echoes.

Should be printed in thousands and plastered all over those 7 continents. Whilst of course, they still exist?!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

7 Years Ago

Not being American, I was careful to think and write generally...
Devra Keokongchack

7 Years Ago

lol like parents setting non examples
emmajoy

7 Years Ago

No, just being diplomatic..

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Added on February 18, 2017
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