Where to go from here

i don't know where to go from here 

here 
where your words sound like bees
buzzing over honey fields. 

you're so beautifully poetic
with flowers as your friends,

blooming upon sketches of your skin

- probably the sweetest kind of peel,
milky and silky

et enivrant à tous les jours,
i would sometimes say.

and i almost wish to bruise it
so that you would not be able to forget me.
but darling,
love it's such a dangerous way
and i just don't know where to go from you.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

smart write...i like the first and last lines...the juxtaposition of "here" and "you"

and the here with you that isn't working anymore.

our love is too dangerous..it's like she has gotten sucked in, but now holds her breath so much so that she can't enjoy the love...something won't quite let her freeflow...so she has to go...

love this poem..

you are very natural in your phrasing...and different..

jacob

[Jéssica Fernandes]

oh, thank you for stopping by and for the amazing review. i loved how you explored the core of this love - a sick-hearted one - and tried to comprehend it.

[Saint_Mario]

Eu não gosto de poemas. Simplesmente não consigo envolver a cabeça à volta deles. Mas tenho que te dizer, este agarrou-me de uma maneira que não esperava. Adorei. Tens muito talento. Não o desperdices.

[Jéssica Fernandes]

também prefiro a prosa e não estou tão segura quando mergulho em tentativas de poesia, por isso o teu comentário soube bem, muito. obrigada.

[Junert]

Such love. If only there were many people like that.

[Verser]

I agree with jacob. I like what I see here. Do you have other poems? Let me know, if you would. I would be very interested in reading them. Thanks, Jéssica.

[Jéssica Fernandes]

i don't usually write in english, so i don't really have much more for you to read. i will be adding them all here, though. thank you for stopping by; your interest in my writing made me glad

[Verser]

I will look forward to your postings.

[@zeewhykay]

ooooh I love this !!! YOU my dear, are so beautifully poetic !! I can never get too excited when I read alliteration, it flows just beautifully. And being half french, I love that french phrase ! This is def going in favorites, you have talent.

[Jéssica Fernandes]

thank you very much, lovely, oh, i'm learning french (my mum is french) and i'm finding the language quite beautiful, so i can't restrain myself from using it here and there.

[Chris]

This was quite...real in the emotional draw. The words, timing and flow - were right.

[Jéssica Fernandes]

oh, thank you :)

[Chris]

I wasn't teasing... and welcome

[zainul]

This is a wonderful write

[Jéssica Fernandes]

thank you!!