Stir of Echos

ECHOS KEEP RINGIN OUT! EMPTY! ABANDON! VACANT,.. 2 THIS THERE IS NO DOUBT.. 1. 2.. 3,,, LOUD, THEN AGAIN I SHOUT! "IS THERE ANYTHING LEFT, PLZ TELL ME NOW!!!!" SOUND... FROM DEEP IN THE DISTANCE, A SOUND..... IN MY HEARTS CANYONS A SOUND, .. THAT AGAIN RETURNS TO ME,,, HOW?... HOW,..? HOW IS THIS I FOUND!!?.. HOW IS THIS I FOUND,.. THE HAUNTING LIES THEN REGRET,.RETURNINIG OUT MY MOUTH!!! ... :::Written By, Cody Wages::::

Reviews

[Laura Lynn]

I feel like there is much here which I am missing. Nice use of capitalization for a desired effect. Is the speaker of the poem afraid in this or lonely? I get the sense that the echoes here are not all good and there is something intimidating or less than desirable about the nature of the echos, like a loud sound which could be gunshots or who knows what

[thegreat972]

Its basically like karma sorta, the echos r basically regret points words or memories calling back to remind me of the things ive had and threw away througheither taking things for granted or not taking chances when they were present...