Lost Boy

I don't know...Im just so depressed and writing how I feel and what i do makes thing's a little more...a little less painful.

young boy so lost in pain,

young boy so filled with anger,

young boy so self damaging,

hear me,

the pain you feel is mine,

your anger flows with in me,

the self damage you do i see,

i feel,

i am.

young boy feeling so dead inside,

young boy seeking out help,

I hear your crys.

I feel your deadness.

I am you.

seeking the next cut,

taking the next pill,

wanting a way out.

you hear my screams for help,

I hear yours.

togather we seek a perfect ending.

an ending to this cruel fate.

togather we seek help,

or a way out.

you are me.

I am you.

let us find that perfect ending,

hand in hand.

Reviews

[Adam :P]

strong emotions, can read and fell.

[katyj]

Such strong emotions, A powerful write, nicely done

[No name]

It was a good piece, that showed your emotions or feelings. I completely understand when you say writing about your feelings can make things seem alittle less painful. Don't stop writing.

[Kaylor Mason]

This brings back memories for me--memories I thought would never come. This is really good, kid, and you're right--writing about what you go through does make it less painful, oddly enough. I don't know why, exactly, but it works