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essence in dreams,

a fog in my mind,

entrancer of my pain,

releaser of my dignity,

luster of my integrity,

carnal to my senses,

fugitive of my heart,

breaker of my soul.

lingering in a tangible hand grasp,

yet just out of my reach.

Author's Note

idk...it just came to me...don't think its that good but yeah lol

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I loved this. It's not bad, it's great! Thanks for sharing.

[No name]

it is a great poem you should like it. :)

[Kaylor Mason]

This one is brilliant! I loved the sparseness of it, and all the senses, both physical and spiritual, are fulfilled with each stanza. The rhythm rolls gently, like a calm summer wave on a lake. Nice work

[johnnyqueer]

This is fantastic! I loved reading this!

[Seanne Tholltree]

i like the whole poem,,yeah it's good

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Love the last two lines... and love the words you used, wow, such a impact in this simple small write, yet not simple because it says so much. Really well written, i think it is good.