you left me

you left me

Yellow flowers,turn to gray.
Out the door, I pushed you away. 
Under the tree, I sit and pray.

Letters are writen, but you never reply.
Eaten alive, each day passes by.  
Forgetting you is the toughest thing.
Throwing away all the memories.

 

Madness taking over the limb.
Every good moment, soon turns to a grim.

Reviews

[Sabrina Fowl]

Your 'About' says you'r nine, right? Well, I can't remember when I was 9 (which is really quite sad since I am in my teens), but do know I never wrote anything that good back then. This is like stuff I write /now/! You should be really proud of your self. If you keep writing (even random stuff in a journal) every day, I will be reading about you in the local news some day. I can see it now... "Cody McLaughlin. Writer of "You Left Me', gets his picture in the Writers Hall of Fame (does that exist yet, 'cause it should).

Never give up on writing, Cody. Never.

If you ever have any questions, just ask!

-'brina

[cody mclaughlin]

thanks so much


I just have a large imagination

[.Lost Soul.]

Oh my... Your really good at writing!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I dont know why, i love this much, it`s absolutely simple and clear, which any poem should be ...it`s also emotional!
~nia~

[cody mclaughlin]

thanks and ftr HHHHHIIIIIIIILoll

[Dominique]

That is so sad. Hopefully that never happens again.

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

This poem is just leaking wtu emotion. Very good write, excellent work.