colors

colors

A Poem by cody mclaughlin
"

are butiful

"

flowers are pink

trees are green

the best picture ive ever seen

the ocean is blue as well as the sky

and a heart is red so im in love and i could almost die

 

 

 

 

© 2012 cody mclaughlin


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sweet, lovely, amazing, its sounds deffinitely as real poem, I like the mixture between seriousness and playing game in this verses...and love colors!
~nia~

Posted 12 Years Ago


How sweet, young love!

Posted 12 Years Ago


it was forsing me to stay underlined


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That is a great poem I like it, but to do emphasis with underline I think you should do it probably on the colors, the Love, and die.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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cody mclaughlin
cody mclaughlin

Little, Town, CO



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My name is Cody McLaughlin I am 10 I love to type and write I love video games I love to write about video games more..

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love love

A Poem by cody mclaughlin