Much like East of Eden

Much like East of Eden

A Poem by Coco

She carried it with her for always
   this burdensome box. small and vast.
Filled with all she is.
Filled with love. 
Seeking its owner, she let them explore
   rummaging the contents with greedy, dirty, disinterested fingers. 
All turning away. Each unable to take the box she carried
   because it was not his. 
Shaking heads, averted eyes. Downcast. Cast away. They handed it back to her. 
   Roughly
   Slyly
   Passively 
   Secretively 
   Brutally
   Apologetically 
   Regretfully 
And finally, on the day he approached, her heart recognized and understood. 
And she loved him because it had been his all along. 

© 2015 Coco


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Feels like love at a yardsale which I love. The metaphor for box was on the nose without me sounding to crude. And the men in this are too relatable! Its what casual browswers of lve do and I totally agreed with the imagery. Well freaking done miss. I was impressed

Posted 9 Years Ago


Coco

9 Years Ago

Thanks, so much! I'm happy with this piece and appreciate your feedback.
Your style is unique and very enjoyable...Excellent...:)..............

Posted 9 Years Ago


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A Poem by Coco


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A Poem by Coco