The Water Flowing

The Water Flowing

A Poem by Try-to-Smile

The sound of water,
Flowing, Racing,
Gets louder and louder,
I get closer and closer,
To the sound of beauty.
I see it now,
The wonder around,
The beautiful sky and bright blue water,
Flowing, Racing.
The sight of this beauty,
Breathtaking to say the least.
This sight,
Its wonderful,
I never want to leave,
The grass is bright green,
Along with the leaves.
The sky so bright,
The water so light.
This place of tranquility,
This place of peace,
Full of amazement,
The colorful reef.
This place is beautiful,
This place is nice.
This place is the best in day and night.
In day,
That beautiful blue.
In night,
The sounds, The dark,
All around.
This place,
The water flowing,
The crickets sounding.
Amazing.

© 2012 Try-to-Smile


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beautiful poem! wonderful sparkling words... well done :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, this is so amazing, a beautiful poem, well done n_n

Posted 12 Years Ago


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