Did i say something wrong?

Did i say something wrong?

A Poem by Try-to-Smile
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Just me questioning about what i did wrong

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Did i say something wrong?
Did i do something wrong?
I think i did, Cause its unanswered,
Its left untouched,
Its left alone.
Did i do wrong once more?
I seem to always be doing things wrong,
I seem to make people mad,
And sad occasionally,
And i annoy people, A lot,
I don't mean to,
Its just me. 
And the last thing i would want to do is annoy Him,
Or be mean to Him,
Or even say something wrong to him.
I don't want to do wrong,
Doing wrong ruins things,
And if this got ruined,
I don't know what i would be,
I wouldn't be me,
It wouldn't be the same,
So i hope i didn't do wrong,
For i swear,
I never mean to do this,
And i'm sorry if i do,
I'm sorry,
Its true.

© 2012 Try-to-Smile


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really good n i now how this feels, whe npeople can relate it makes the poetry even better, keep up the good work :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thanks, and i will :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


love this poem its awsome keep it up

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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