I'm Not Beautiful

I'm Not Beautiful

A Poem by Try-to-Smile
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A poem of what i think, and what iv'e been thinking for a while.

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Im not beautiful, 
I know this is true,
He never says it,
The one i would love to hear it from doesn't say it, Him,
Others say it,
But being called ugly hurt, Really bad,
I've gotten called ugly to many times by too many people to believe a single persons "your beautiful",
He doesn't even say it any more. 
He used to, 
I used to love it,
I felt special,
I felt pretty,
Beautiful, 
And proud,
But now he stopped,
And i feel ugly,
I feel fat.
And self conscious around others. 
When he used to say it, 
That said it all,
"You look Beautiful today"
And when he doesn't say it,
...
His silence says it all :'(

© 2012 Try-to-Smile


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This is a good and solid poem and its relevant to how many feel about themselves. It isn't fair that a person's self eesteem is so often tied to peers opinions. Each of us - you, me, EVERYONE - has worth and value. We all FEEL things - hurt, love, shame, pride, anger, frustration, sadness. We have a need to be accepted and to be a part of the world around us.

Life isn't just about beauty and hunks - it IS about who we are inside and how we act toward others. A person is only ugly when they act toward others in an intended hurtful way.

You spoke your mind very well and clearly.

Take care,
Chris

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Great poem! And each and every person is unique and beautiful! Don't let anybody make you feel bad about yourself!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the poem,
but please understand,
your beauty is much more than another person's opinion.
It is in every syllable, every line of this poem.

Good poem.
Beautiful, even!
t

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is a good and solid poem and its relevant to how many feel about themselves. It isn't fair that a person's self eesteem is so often tied to peers opinions. Each of us - you, me, EVERYONE - has worth and value. We all FEEL things - hurt, love, shame, pride, anger, frustration, sadness. We have a need to be accepted and to be a part of the world around us.

Life isn't just about beauty and hunks - it IS about who we are inside and how we act toward others. A person is only ugly when they act toward others in an intended hurtful way.

You spoke your mind very well and clearly.

Take care,
Chris

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"jens books" Thanks :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


nice poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thanks i guess? but im not sure who you are so im just gonna leave it at that...

Posted 12 Years Ago


You are very beautiful, every day.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 23, 2012
Last Updated on February 24, 2012
Tags: pain, ugly, fat, love, beautiful

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