Am i dead?

This isnt like true or anything, just a poem, nothing of truth. I just felt like writing this

Am i dead?

Am i gone?

I cant quite tell,

Its hard to tell,

Everyone around me seems to just pass by,

Even my friends don't say hi,

I can't hear, What can't i? 

You see, My Love, Well thats the sadest part,

My Love can't see me, Or something,

And he, Well hes turning to blur,

I cant see him,

It seems as if he went under murky water,

Under the layer of filth,

To the point where hes unseen,

That's the saddest part,

We can't talk, I try,

But i have gone to what seems invisible, To Him, To everyone,

Why does this happen?

My life, Full of happy and love,

Now its all gone, They can't see me,

Either that or they have left me,

All alone in the dark,

Whats happened?

Am i dead? Or still alive?

Why can't i tell?

Its so hard,

It hurts me so bad, 

I talk and they act if there not sad,

They act as if they didn't hear me, Or see me,

Even The One has gone away,

The One for me, He made my day,

He was my love, He was my life,

And now hes gone away with everything else i like,

My home,

My cat, My best friends,

All the people i loved or liked,

All the objects i treasured,

Are unreachable, Unseen,

I can see them,

Can they see me? Or are they just ignoring me?

Or am i just crazy?

Cause everythings making me dizzy,

I cant stand much longer,

My feet are giving out,

The floors going black,

Whats happening to me?

Am i leaving? Is this good bye?

If so i love you all,

Ill miss you My Love,

I guess this is it,

I can see no longer,

I have fallen,

Onto my knees,

Now I am falling,

falling.

Reviews

Wow! There are some powerful words used in this poem! Nice job!