Killing me inside

Killing me inside

A Poem by Try-to-Smile
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sad thing that i wrote about, happened /happens to me often.

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I ask, With pure excitement,
With pure happy,
Then my happy turns to HAPPY, When you say yes,
Ten minutes later, My phone lights up,
Its you, Saying the usual, Taking it back,
Saying never mind its a no,
Now my happy turns to sad,
It hurts you know!
You never understand what you do,
You never will,
Its always the same,
Its always hurt,
I dont know what to do,
The unthinkable comes to mind,
But then you wouldnt care, so why not do it?
Everytime, You say yes, Get my hopes up, Get me happy as ever,
Then you say no, Kill me inside, And rip my heart out like its nothing,
Do you care? Do you not know?
Or do you just enjoy killing me inside everyday.

© 2012 Try-to-Smile


Author's Note

Try-to-Smile
a sad thing, just sad, and it happened to me and now i just feel like crap.

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Ohh!

Posted 12 Years Ago


i was just meaning that i got happier, emphasis on the CAPITOL LETTERS

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awww

Maybe you could reword the third line?? It kinda confused me but other then that, another beautiful poem from you. Good Job :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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