Combine the Difference

Combine the Difference

A Poem by Cocoacandy

Harsh light,

Dances off my skin,

Highlighting my flaws,

And showing them off.

 

My faults are my strengths,

And my strengths are my faults.

Today is the day I combine the difference.

Forget not my awkward moments,

But laugh in the memory,

Remind yourself that we’re all human,

Even when we decide we’re diverse.

© 2011 Cocoacandy


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I like the strength in your words and the logic also. People who look for weaknesses first. Won't know the goodness and kindness of others. True beauty is what you do and say in a life. I like the ending to the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I like the strength in your words and the logic also. People who look for weaknesses first. Won't know the goodness and kindness of others. True beauty is what you do and say in a life. I like the ending to the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i agree, i couldnt quite find the right words... not exactly impressed with the last few lines, but i decided to post it anyway cuz i liked the idea lol

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this poem.I also agree though the last two lines are a bit out of sync to an otherwise perfect poem..Very well written..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

last two lines are kinda vague.. what do you think?

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Strong message well presented thumbs up :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

acceptance is the one word that comes to mind here when this was written. As it was said before very triumphant words here. Very impressive, nice work.

Inspiration = Wisdom

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

there is power in these words, spoken loudly inside ones head

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Cocoacandy
Cocoacandy

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im a fairly random person that tends to confuse people. i try not to, but hey, whatevs... i enjoy writing poetry, and once in a while dabble in short stories, occasionally books... im attemping to wri.. more..

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