Are you sure this is Help?

Are you sure this is Help?

A Poem by Cocoacandy

The tiny letters on the box,

Are they supposed to help?

They don’t even look like words,

Let alone a list of steps.

 

These people that make the directions,

They needn’t follow their own instruction,

They don’t know our pain.

Do they not understand that we’re confused?

 

And no, if I am having troubles with my computer,

I can’t look up a solution online,

If my phone is the problem,

I cannot call your customer help hotline.

© 2011 Cocoacandy


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This only tells you so much of how society and the people in it work to get their own advantage on everything now-a-days. Great work keep writing.

-Writer *78*

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Sam
I love this. It's so true, it's very impressive. Keep writing :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honest, and a great commentary on modern communication. Well done and great idea. I however would have like too see more length only because I enjoyed so much.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh, I love it! XD So painfully true...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very hard to talk to real people on the phone now. Machines are blocking you from all directions. I still don't trust the machines. A outstanding poem. I know the feeling of this poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hahhah, i like it, though... the rhyme's all off, but we knew that already; so. it makes me smile.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 29, 2011
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Cocoacandy
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im a fairly random person that tends to confuse people. i try not to, but hey, whatevs... i enjoy writing poetry, and once in a while dabble in short stories, occasionally books... im attemping to wri.. more..

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