Zompire

Did you ever wonder,

What would happen,

If a zombie

And a vampire,

Fell in love,

What would happen?

 

They’d create a zompire,

A unkillable bloodsucker,

Who only came out at night,

Every child’s night mare.

 

You, my dear,

Seem to know how its done,

As you can see,

You are my nightmare,

An undead being,

With no emotion at all,

Who craves blood,

And never stays for long.

 

But good luck,

‘cuz now I have the garlic,

And my heart is filled

With silver spires,

For I shall never let another

In the way I did you.

Reviews

[Writer *78*]

Purely a delight. I think that even kids today from the ages of 5-8 would get a kick out of reading this because it involves monsters. Great work.

-Writer *78*

[Revolutionary]

Twisted.you fell in love with a zamphire.All the things that could have ended that poem,I never seen that coming.A story in a short poem.Hard to pull off,but you did it.This could be the intro to a sexy horror.Happy Birthday.I love Mexican food

[Ardeck]

i like how you lure the reader in innocently and then hit the m with the cold truth of reality

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[Sylph Drake]

Forceful. I like it.

[Thomas Sawyer]

Short and beautiful. My kind of poem

[Thomas Sawyer]

Short and beautiful. My kind of poem

[Sam]

Nicely done. But I have to go now.....I need to buy some garlic xD

[Jūdan FyreHeart]

Nicely done, a cynical and bitter little piece with a sharp ending.

[Coyote Poetry]

I will be safe. I eat a lot of garlic and I'm old. Too tough to chew. A interesting poem. A zombie is like a vampire anyway. A bloody brain is a good feast. A very good ending to a interesting poem.
Coyote