The Strangest one Yet

The Strangest one Yet

A Poem by Cocoacandy
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i had a strange dream last night, and freelancejouster prompted me to write a poem about it... enjoy! XD

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a street I know well,

my own car, me at the wheel,

everything normal.

But alas, my car, is not my car,

But a car that is shrunken in size.

With no roof but a motor, and no room for a driver,

How will this end?

 

A trailer park unknown,

No brakes in this car,

Up a porch all alone,

Where can I be?

My car is gone, up the porch I run,

Unaware how to stop,

Holding this steering wheel,

Surprise!

 

Dear sir,

I cannot fit,

My car is too small.

A grandAm Gt,

Too small for me?

 

My mother a car?

How absurd, you see,

But now I must leave,

Cuz I cannot stop,

You see?

 

 

© 2011 Cocoacandy


Author's Note

Cocoacandy
Utter nonsense, i know... so now you see how i was so confused when i woke up!
heres a link to her poem bout the same dream!
strangers shold be more suspicious

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I have had dreams like this before as well. Interesting, nice work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love dreams like this, they seem so damn real while your sleeping and then you wake up and its like holy hell! Cool write, cool dream, great job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have been having wild dreams lately. Not as wild as this one. A interesting tale. I like this poem. I needed a poem to lighten up my thoughts. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a car, a car you see, it's a car, but no, my mother's made by GMT xD
cute, the perfect kind of poem for rhyming.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 1, 2011
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Cocoacandy
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im a fairly random person that tends to confuse people. i try not to, but hey, whatevs... i enjoy writing poetry, and once in a while dabble in short stories, occasionally books... im attemping to wri.. more..

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