Just Listen!

again, wrote this poem last year...

Oh! The Pain!
This world is giving me
a headache...
everyone is talking,
giving their "advice"
telling me what i SHOULD do...
all i wanted was
for someone to LISTEN,
for once..
not someone to tell me
THEIR problems,
not someone to give
THEIR thoughts on it,
not someone who tells
me if I'm RIGHT or WRONG...
But, instead, someone
who listens quietly,
and CARES...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You want what most people wants. Someone to listen and be a friend. I believe we must learn all good and bad things by trial and error. A very strong ending to a outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[D S Rollins]

We all need someone to listen... and not talk over you =/

[E.H. Monroe]

they just wait for the time to talk...f*****g fiends...

[Thomas Sawyer]

You need someone to listen. Don't we all?

[freelancejouster]

the anger that goes with this is very enticing, nice work.