FINE. i am going to at least start reading this today. right now. but first, for some criticism on chapter titles, maybe put them all in the same format? something similar to chapter 12? or like "Chapter Twelve: Hurtful Memories" whatever, they're just suggestions so as to make it look more uniform and worth reading.
im a fairly random person that tends to confuse people. i try not to, but hey, whatevs... i enjoy writing poetry, and once in a while dabble in short stories, occasionally books... im attemping to wri.. more..