Pure Innocence

Could Death take a side against pure evil?

 

Pure Innocence

 

 

Out about this one dark eve

Rose up one devil conceived

Tasting once the tender grace

Of those so innocent

Death would ner chase.

 

Stalks now one so full of youth

Knowing this fruit so pure and chaste

May once again his maker might haste

And find within this deep dank soul

No heart, no mercy but death’s dark toll.

 

Facing him now she stands so small

Yet afraid he becomes

And feet found solid

As rocks they be

No escape her gaze!

 

Failing no option, now sinister within

Yet solid stand feet on this hallowed ground

She sings a bright melody, and sparkles her eyes

Death now joins as by her side

That dark soul falters now fast!

 

Sun now stabs deep his heart

Which never flowed blood fresh

Only cold and dark

Death now laughs as sings she her song

Back to darkness she drives him long.

 

Ner again to rise as breaks now this dawn

Driving him back to depths of Hell

Dark night has slain this creature of death

Who knew not why

But only the sport!

 

George O. (Pete) Love

July 2009

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Ruth]

Unique :)
You know, death here is clever :) The thrill and the chase!
Thrilling read love!
xx

[Cherrie Palmer]

this story was well crafted into a graceful poem

[Taylor H.]

I agree with Bette! This was a great poem!

[Bette]

I Love the words in this piece,and i really like the story it tells. it was a wonderful read. well done.

[Valentine]

Black poetry..have you ever tried the sites that feature this type of writing...?

[angelina neves]

beautifully piece!

[Helen Crutchett]

Wonderful poetry! I truly enjoyed this dark one from
beginning to end. Great imagery to capture one's
imagination to see the evil and darkness amost jump
from the page.

Thank you for "Keeping the Dream Alive" ~ Helena

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning poem.