Lost In the Darkness

For a contest

 

Lost in the Darkness

 

All the light I found vanished

In one flash of time,

All dreams whisked away

All my breath flew from within

Blasted into one great hollow

 

All is gone and lost

Without the one I trusted

Yes, even loved

It is all but loss

At the hands of an unknown

 

Dreams dashed into darkness

Life slips now away

For one careless thought

One careless moment

Should strip away all hope.

 

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Dreams dashed into darkness
Life slips now away
For one careless thought
One careless moment
Should strip away all hope.

This is good a really good write! Sad but worthwhile read.

[SM Davis]

Wow! Very nicely done!

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

For one careless thought, for one careless moment, should strip all hope away... So true and so very well written. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Sean M. Addams]

i like the dark tone in this piece .... flow and imagery are great in this ... overall a very good write!!!!