Blurb for Hummer: Flight to Freedom

Book Blurb

 

2032—LeAnn Bethany Connors, appears to be a normal, twelve-year-old girl. On the inside, Beth is a special child, an accidental mutant with incredible intelligence, amazing strength, and the ability to communicate with machines. Beth loves freedom after years of testing and captivity in the cruel Arizona training facility.

Her captors trained her to kill, heal and fight; receive orders to terminate Beth and her friends. Beth and some of her friends escape and must use their skills to save their lives and the lives of the Mazequaki, a winged people who understand the plight of Beth and her friends. 

 

 

Reviews

[Mollie Sue]

oh wow i was pulled into this imediatly! this is a really good story and normally i have a very short attention spans when it comes to stories i pick my stories very carefully when i read them. i really loved this!! when you continue this story please, please! send me a read request i loved it and i cant wait for more!

[F.R. Eileen]

Ooh, nice! I like this a lot, and I'll certainly read the other chapters. :)

[None]

You leave yourself wide open to more and that's a good thing! I have really enjoyed the surprises and suspense throughout your very well written story!

[Jet Lag]

good plotline. this sentence is unclear:
Her captors trained her to kill, heal and fight; receive orders to terminate Beth and her friends.

should it read:
Her captors trained her to kill, heal and fight, and then her captors receive orders to terminate Beth and her friends.

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