Stop This Insanity!

Never mind, you'll figure it out!

 

Stop this Insanity!

 

Ever more increasing it rises,

The ether sound of that incessant drip

Two more hours till rest shall be had,

Lest the constant pressure restore

Precious resources flow down the drain

While under my pillow my screams I refrain!

 

Will ever one come and to stop this madness?

What knight shall rescue us from this dark dank sound?

While off to search those parts desired,

Comes one with such a lofty price

Surely madness runs within his veins!

Yet there before me lies the quest!

 

Parts in hand I leave in joy,

And even yet while in this task

Should one ever forget to ask?

Is all for nothing if plans now fail?

Shall one more night be spent deprived

Of rest so needed for long days night?

 

Ever mocking now it sits

Never knowing its end is near

Tools in hand and parts, now fear!

Remove, inspect, replace and test!

Yes, yes, this drip is now no more

And ha ha! , tonight find I my rest!

 

And yet, which one of the detectors now beep?

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Great message involved with this peice. wonderfully written.


Great Write
Rayne

[poddar kushal]

a poet who is questioning, mocking and craving for a knight.writes a poem knowing that we shall remember the profecy that he told us :end is near! good writing as usual.

[Jenny Davis]

Very interesting! I think you are talking about fire/emergency alarms or maybe a regular alarm clock...hate those myself :)

[Kaden Sylvers]

"Will ever one come and to stop this madness?
What knight shall rescue us from this dark dank sound?" strong powerful images & strong diction in the whole poem but esp in those 2 lines (=';