Places Changed

Changing Places with another writer, or someone who does not write. Where do we get this stuff?

 

Places Changed

 

Would that you were in my place

That you could feel the pains I feel

And hear the voices within my head

Would I could with you this share

And watch the wonder in your eyes

When ideas flow from mind to pen

Could that moment be kept in time

Now for all to feel this rush

When ideas come from deep within

And watch ideas flow onto this canvas

As once again words come forth

Watching words paint for the mind to see.

What course will the next work take?

Will it reflect or will it reveal?

Or just some fair musings make?

Or maybe would that I were in your place

To read those words and wonder

How it would be to pen such thoughts.

 

Reviews

[Kitty Davies]

I believe your poem to be lovely and an accurate tale of writing and those who sit outside of it and wonder where these words form from. I find the short length a pleasing format for such a work and thank you for sharing in with all of us. :)