Perfect

The Perfect Girl

 

Perfect

 

Brightly laughing eyes

Always shining

Even through rain.

They were my sun

Hair so black

Shining with light

And skin so soft

I knew you were

Unknowing as I sat

Not too far away

And watched your every move

As you walked about

Speaking so softly and tenderly

Every word a song.

Was it I only who heard?

Heart now smitten

In love now I fall

For you are so perfect

With you fall I will

Never did you know

And never you will

This love held inside

Years all they heal

Yet cut now so deeply

With needles so sharp

Love from inside

Wants only an escape

Never will be ever

This love for you known

To my grave this flame I carry

This flame own you now.

Watching afar,

Our lives how they change

Yet I see you still

Perfect.

 

Reviews

[Ruth]

As spoken word, this would fabulous! It has such a great flow love :) A really powerful and beautfiully bright poem, such a devotion is never known, so saddening!
xx

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

a beautiful poem - very nicely done

[Fran Marie]

A Beautiful write so well expressed and nicely penned~ Fran

[Jayne Ann Saporito]

This is so beautiful and heartbreaking as well. The words you use, weave, into such beauty.
"Never will be everThis love for you known"...........who among us has not had this experience? You speak to everyone here, and so well.

[Paula M. Potter]

Very beautiful and good luck on the contest!

[Marie]

Nicely written.

[Dezaraye]

This is a beautiful piece How wonderful to feel love such as this.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Great imagery, nicely done.


Great Write
Rayne