Outline Of "Notes For Exchanging"

Outline Of "Notes For Exchanging"

A Story by La Fille Folle
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This is my outline of the teen cute romance story I've been working on, "Notes For Exchanging". Hope you like it!

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Speaking from the two-side point of views, the story becomes more reliable. One by fifteen-year-old Elizabeth White(Liz) and another by eighteen-year-old Willelm Richards.

The first scene starts from Elizabeth’s point of view, describing it when she starts her new life in a new high school. It’s the first chapter.

Then the second chapter will be writing about Willelm’s normal life and describes the relationship between Willelm and his friends, teachers, and family.

The third chapter will be about Liz. As the time she sees Willelm on the stage, translating a beautiful French poem, she’s in love with him. She starts planning to “accidently meet him” and decides to do so the next day.

On the other hand, the next chapter(chapter four) starts from the lunch time. Willelm finishes his lunch and is on his way back to his homeroom. But suddenly, a girl(Liz) appears with a book in hand(pretending reading but actually planning to “accidently” hit him) and seems really into the book so she doesn’t see Willelm. They almost hit each other and they both stop to see if another is hurt or anything. Then, magically, they know each other and Liz’s plan comes true.

In chapter five, I write in Liz’s point of view and tell the readers what happens. From Willelm’s point of view he thinks that it’s an accident; to Liz it’s TOTALLY different.

Days to days, step by step . . . Liz and Willelm start to know each other better, and there are many things inside this story about the feeling of being in love with a boy that’s older than you. I will also try to think in a “boy’s brain” and try to write and describe Willelm’s feelings as best as I can.

Still working on it! J

Please give some advice guys if you have any idea when you are with some younger girls who are so clearly into you. How will you think and behave?

© 2012 La Fille Folle


Author's Note

La Fille Folle
It's just my own note. :)
By the way, I am not a native English speaker, and I am only fifteen, there might be some errors in my vocab or grammar. Sorry about that.

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La Fille Folle
La Fille Folle

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Hi there. My pen name is La Fille Folle, which, in English, is called The Crazy Girl. But you an just call me M. I love reading and writing stories and I started writing stories since I was in second .. more..

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