The Fall of Marisea
A Book by Knight
 While I don't plan on making this a "book," I want to organize the scenes into chapters for my leisure.
The story follows Minos Souli, the husband of a queen in a moribund nation.
 © 2019 Knight
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I would like to know your overall opinion on it, as well as what you think I did well in or what I should improve upon (like dialogue, showing and not telling, character development, etc.).
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Knight
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Hey, you can call me Knight. I'm someone simply trying to get my writing critiqued so that I can understand my weaknesses and strengths. I typically write fantasy, but I can be flexible when the need .. more..
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