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F**k Love. lol

Remember that time you killed me

in your dream

oh yeah, guess that’s every night

when you sleep

No matter how many times you

say you love me

Careless emotion hides feelings

your voice screams

Reviews

[Teresa]

Wow when I say "F*ck Love" Im like the F. But I read this poem and I felt something. And honestly that happens rarely but wow I'm just so speechless .. um this was outstanding, just amazing. I know its a small poem but its woderful. Its not appalling at all.

Nice Job


- Teresa K aka Luna

[Cole Thomas]

First, thank you, it means so much when others can connect to what I pour my soul over. Second, It's short and wonderful, I agree with you. It also has a second poem inside, don't know if that one is as good, and it's definitely subtle like the title.

[lessa (kenzie)]

so well expressed i like the flow of it

[conversations with her ..]

Wow,

I really enjoyed this poem, it's short yet so powerful.

Great read!

I recently just posted 4 new poems on my page: Restless, Free-flowing, a stranger to self, and mistress.

when you get a chance, let me know what you think!

Id appreciates the feedback.

[Crowley]

I can so relate to this. Undermining my emotions in little ways that seem nothing to them but everything to you. This one hits just the right spot, pisses me off a bit, but only because I understand it. Great work!!!

[Malvika]

Whoa this took me aback
With few words you hit the right emotions and this was so impactful
I just kept reading it again and again cause it brought many unsung feelings
A great write

[Cole Thomas]

You're too kind. Thank you. I read it over and over as well. It's just one of those poems, i guess. I got lucky it connected so closely with you and others. That's one thing great poems do.

[D. L. Hutson]

Actions speak louder than words. No matter how many times you say you love someone their actions will tell every time. Sorry you went through this. Thanks for sharing.

[Cole Thomas]

Thank you for the comment. You hit the nail on the head!