Creature

Creature

A Poem by cmaynard

 

Creature
 
Creature cruel and cold,
Consuming… I can’t concentrate,
Completely controlled by confident character,
Cool, calm, curious and cryptic,
Casual conversation continues…
 
Somehow the scenario shifts,
Seductress… slowly we sway,
Subtlety she strokes,
Soft and silken… sexual,
Spelled, the slightest sense is sublime.
 
Deadly and dangerous is her decorum,
Delicate and dainty,
Delightfully delicious… decisions,
Directly draw by my desires,
Definitely this devious devil is a deviant indeed.

© 2008 cmaynard


Author's Note

cmaynard
Can you guess what was on my mind the week I wrote this....... [not sidetracked at all]

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Hm... I have no idea what was on your mind!
*feigns innocence*

I will say this was spicy, though.
Through and through!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Good use of aliteration But the varying line lengths make it read choppily read aloud I am an old fashioned formalist and muc prefer metred poetry. I would no dare to guess what is or was on any females mind I am just a man

Posted 16 Years Ago



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cmaynard
cmaynard

Adelaide, Australia



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I enjoy anything that is either based in fantasy, science or martial arts. I love writing poetry in my spare time, if I get any. I love the outdoors and outdoors sport when I get the time which is not.. more..

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